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Making Babies
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Monday, 24th July 2006 @ 05:19:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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When it becomes a thing of the past
and plays with your head no more
When it sleeps with the dead
and waits for the dirt
it becomes nothing
like nothing it began
Take for instance,
a new existence-
of man upon the stars
of plants without the sun
all for one
all are now none
manufactured fun
Effortless was the push
towards the eventual collapse
the instinctual was detached
practiced witchcraft
soaking up the devils bath
with the soap of God
feel the wrath
In high demand
once were the grains of sand
the secrets of man
the burning of the dammed
the taming of the land
the cultivation of the dirt
in the hopes of rain
less stomach pain
less hurt
Powerful problems
no conceived solution
contrived delusions
perforated contusions
under the skin
blood and water combine in precision
an incision
into the bone of wisdom
the heart of the kingdom
apart from the reason
instead of believing
Playtime for adults
Away time from the ropes
A straight mind
No overdose
The correct time
Parallel lines
Intercross
Peppered then salt
Nobodys fault
Everyone gets caught
In nets of rubber cloth
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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Re: Making Babies
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 01:09:00 PM AEST
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I'm impressed! Great write and play with words throughout this, gets the attention of the reader from start to finish!!
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Re: Making Babies
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by RLWildPassions on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 02:58:17 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem. RL |
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Re: Making Babies
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 7th November 2014 @ 01:53:40 PM AEST
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Haha! Sneaky ending of the ol' wordsmith we know and love as jyssvw22. A lot of wisdom and perspective in your thoughts...Not that I'm surprised one bit. You have a gift as clear as cellophane. Bravo.
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