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Secret Admirer
Contributed by
darien
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Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 10:55:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Its after midnight on your street
I find it hard to keep my feet
But all that I can do is stare
And wonder what Im doing here
My silent vigil at your door
A place that I have stood before
Its better to be looking in
Than sitting home and wondering
What youd say, what youd do
I know that Im too low for you
You dont give me a single glance
And I hold no hope of true romance
This cruel mind of tricks and dreams
Does lay on me the hurtful scenes
Of futures that will never pass
I choke back tears in quiet gasps
Though most say loves a kind of torture
Its one-sided love that hurts you further
But I want nothing more than this
Knowing, fully, what the price is
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darien
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2006-07-25 10:55:08]
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Re: Secret Admirer
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by Ruby2sdy on
Tuesday, 25th July 2006 @ 11:10:53 AM AEST
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It's not weak at all, I enjoyed it, nice rhyme scheme, good flow, and yes, unrequited love really does hurt the most, as many of us (far too many if you ask me) already know!
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Re: Secret Admirer
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by kellycat on
Thursday, 4th December 2008 @ 09:54:04 PM AEST
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