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Ocean's End
Contributed by
Arwen
on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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Eternity is a long time.
Weaving every human emotion and memory
In it's lighted vastness.
Sitting at the water's edge...building
A fragile sandcastle for the rushing tides.
The ocean is like a wayward comedy.
Refreshing. Therapeutic.
I feel it's gentle movements...
The swirling little waves of foam easing
My troubled mind.
Like a comedy...
Making me smile...despite its cold.
It ebbs and rises sending
Tendrils of nostalgia.
Mirroring the continuity of existence.
The beginning of time,
The beauty of ancient kingdoms.
Arrival and hurried departure.
A symbol of sorts of how...
People come into your life,
Twisting it out of control,
soaking your heart with their vitality.
And how...just as easily...they depart.
Leaving you cold and confused.
It takes a lot of introspect to see the
Good that comes out of all this.
And somewhere...inside of you...you know it was supposed to be that way.
You know they've left a mark.
A painless little scar that reminds you...
With every beat...
That there's endless more to come.
That our burden's haven't yet begun.
Soon.
The Universe will unfold as it should...
Continuing to brandish its power over us.
Eternity is a long time...
To live.
Copyright ©
Arwen
... [
2003-02-10 20:00:00]
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Re: Ocean's End
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by Ronald on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:18:42 PM AEST
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| This is simply wonderful! Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Ocean's End
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 08:29:15 PM AEST
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| beautiful................. |
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Re: Ocean's End
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by kristie on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 08:16:52 AM AEST
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i think u r a wonderful poet who deserve alot of credit i think that a comment from me means little my poems arent nicely worded like yours i am new to this site but u have my vote
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