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World Beneath the Sea
Contributed by
Gentlemanpoet
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Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:06:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
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From a distant land I travel far, to stand upon your shore.
Each day the breezes whisper soft, your islands do implore.
I look across blue waters there, to meet horizons edge.
Exploring deep a whole new world, along the oceans ledge.
The sea displays its brilliant hues, an exhibition bright.
Your waters clear like crystal blue, reflecting suns pure light.
The coral there like woven rock, manifesting natures hand.
A myriad of painted fish, in a vivid parade so grand.
On the ocean floor I view, its plant life ever swaying.
Like their dancing to a beat, the ocean music playing.
A violet fan in rhythmic motion, like a palm tree in a breeze.
This wonderland beneath the sea, my visual senses please.
Each day I dream of my return, to that world beneath the sea.
Within my mind I cant recall a better place to be.
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Re: World Beneath the Sea
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by Broken_Wingz on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:50:03 PM AEST
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Oh my. This was absolutely beautiful. You paint such an amazing picture with your words. You are very very talented. Thank you very much for sharing this. I really enjoyed it.
Krystal |
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Re: World Beneath the Sea
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by Jenni_K on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:03:55 AM AEST
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Wow...you have just described the Coral Reef and Nylon Pool of our island Paradise of Tobago...
Wonderful job here.. I loved this...
I wish you could see some pics of the reef.
Jenni |
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Re: World Beneath the Sea
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by doug on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:20:39 AM AEST
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You have painted a picture every bit as
vivd as any I've seen with my eyes.
I felt as though I was there and it was
a fabulous place to be if only for a moment.
Perhaps I'll have to read it again.
The only thing better than one vacation to
the sea are two vacations to the sea.
take care , doug |
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