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Welcome to my world
Contributed by
M
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Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 09:00:00 PM in AEST
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Welcome to my world,
Don't judge, or freak out,
Try not to scream and shout,
There's too much noise here already,
I can't take anymore.
You're free to leave anytime,
please do, please leave me here alone,
There's no where else for me, this is my home,
Don't get trapped here like i am,
Don't be like me, depressions whore.
Welcome to my world,
On entering, ignorance is the cost,
innocence is lost,
Try and forget your past,
Once your in, it will only hold you down.
So, please, get out of my world you now know,
I don't want to change your life like me,
Don't want to hurt you, you see,
So, now you've got the chance,
Leave my world, let it be.
Come on Char it's not for you,
i want you here,
But now you're too near,
to the pain i feel everyday,
It's not for you, stay away.
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M
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Re: Welcome to my world
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by karoody on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:13:10 PM AEST
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| I could be wrong, but maybe if you don't shut Char out, rather than ending up in your spot, maybe she can help you out? I've been there...shut too many out, now they're gone and I'm lonely. There has to be another option. |
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Re: Welcome to my world
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by bobotheclown on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 07:53:26 PM AEST
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I agree with Karoody Emily... besides that I dont really know what to say. I wish I could give u a hug...
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Re: Welcome to my world
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by LadyDama on
Thursday, 20th February 2003 @ 11:58:32 AM AEST
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| i have to agree with both karoody and bobotheclown... sad poem, but beautifully written... keep writing it out... |
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Re: Welcome to my world
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 15th June 2003 @ 04:26:32 PM AEST
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oh em, thank you so much, and i'm so, so sorry...
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Re: Welcome to my world
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 19th January 2004 @ 07:31:12 AM AEST
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i just re-read this and felt i had to comment again.. im so glad u did let me in Em, and im just sad you feel bad about that.. and the world i knew wasnt the world i loved, it was just life for me at that time, thats all...
things are so different now to how it was back then, but i cant regret any of it..
love you so much darlin...
char xxx |
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