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Uncontrollable
Contributed by
ManInTheMask
on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 03:38:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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What the hell is going on?
Why does everything feel so wrong?
My heart aches, in so much pain.
Blood races like pouring rain.
Why do I feel this way?
Like I have no purpose or meaning to the day.
Can one persons effect do this?
Am I going mad, should I just dismiss?
I want to smile, be happy like I always do.
But this hold you have over me, it must be you.
I dont want to just give up or let it go.
Why should I? I just want you to know.
But then Im scared Ill push you away.
I see the fear creeping up on me more each day.
I wont let it take control, consume, devour.
Ill fight it till the dying hour.
Still why do you have this effect on me?
Escaping trying to be free.
Maybe I should just give in.
Letting the love win.
I wont be afraid, breathing deep.
Get back up, on my feet.
Relax, calm down.
Start smiling remove that frown.
So stop wishing it away.
Love, its here to stay.
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ManInTheMask
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Re: Uncontrollable
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by Broken_Wingz on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:47:05 PM AEST
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Amazing. I really like this write. I can totally relate to the feeling in this poem. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: Uncontrollable
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by weepingXxwillows on
Monday, 3rd November 2008 @ 11:17:49 AM AEST
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| very good poem. im going through something similar to this right now, im gratefull i read this. |
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