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the dreaded monsters inside my head
Contributed by
True
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Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:34:23 PM in AEST
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Pointed tooth monster
your claw digging deeper
always seeming to find new blood
silver scaled beast
your shell all agleam
crunching and scraping inside my head
I must see you
the price of my vanity
I knew your cousin as well
he caused me so much pain
at times I couldn't even eat
and always he was there
always pulling
disfiguring my face
the price of the gift he gave
for in temporary disfigurement
he gave me permanent beauty
but now his brother haunts me
he will haunt me till my grave
what are these beasts of maniacal designs?
These are the wicked beasts of the dreaded dentist
the first is used in cleanings
his cousin is braces
and the brother of braces is a retainer
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Re: the dreaded monsters inside my head
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by Broken_Wingz on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 07:39:55 PM AEST
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That was very cute. I'm not sure if that was how you were trying to come across but none the less I liked it. Very good write. Thank you for sharing.
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Re: the dreaded monsters inside my head
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 10:30:02 PM AEST
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well, yet oddly expressed.
good. |
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Re: the dreaded monsters inside my head
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by doug on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 11:49:38 PM AEST
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I've been lucky enough to not yet need any
dental work but my mother is very afraid of the dentist. She gets crazy at the sound of a drill. Very interesting work. Truly ,
Signed , Doug |
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Re: the dreaded monsters inside my head
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 08:50:35 PM AEST
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True~
lol, a visit to the dentist. My you had me drawn in and I wanted so much to know what u were speaking about. You did a great job on this one well done.
warm hugs,
suzie Q |
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Re: the dreaded monsters inside my head
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by lord_sogi on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 11:24:13 AM AEST
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| awesome awesome! Lol a funny subject to pick, and a very nice job. I already had an idea of what it was before the last four lines. So you do a good job pulling in a reader and making them think and imagine. Superbly done! |
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