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the first the last
Contributed by
taytay67
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Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 08:40:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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waiting waitng heart beats faster wit every second passing i think to my self now now it must do it now. i being to shake inside i wonder i think i doubt i build courage. i lean over and kiss her on the cheaak. she pulls her hair back. i say i luv u more than life it self. she says i luv u to. we kiss we connect were inseperable. its ends as fst as it starts we cuddle we just stay there we r in luv. we dont have to sdo anything we just love being wit eachother. we are one we are inseperable. we being to move. we hold hands we want to always be together. we walk we talk the kiss is branded on my lips. the moment passes but the feeling stays. its somthing we will always remeber. the day ends, we say our good byes. we wisper i luv u and we leave. we are seperated but we are still one. we miss eachother. we want to be togther. a text comes through. it says i luv u. i answer wit i luv u 2. we want to be together. we talk more. we sleep we dream of the kiss. the moment passes but the feeling stays.
I wake, it is moring i get ready for the day. i test. she texts bak. somthing doesnt seem right i say to myself. i leave. i come bak. a bad vibe arises. i hate the day i wish it would end. i look. a text. i read. tears roll down me cheeks. the moment passes but the feeling stays. the worst thing that possibly happened happend. the moment is gone but the feeling remains. i cry i pray. the moment passees but the hurt stays. i wonder wat i did. wat did i do to deserve such a fate. the moment passes but the hurt remains. wat doesnt kill me makes me stronger. i am dead in side i am weak. i am vulnerable. i cry. the moment is gone but the hurt stays. i remeber the first. i was the first. i always wil be. the moment is gone but the feeling remains but the hurt will stay. i remeber i remebr it so clearly. i feel it. it sseems so real. the moment is gone but the feeling remains and the hurt will stay. i am dead inside. y must it be this way. it must be a joke. wat cruel joke is this. i must have her bak. it is luv. we are in seperable. we are seperated. we are 2. it ends. we will never no. time can onlyheal teh wound within. the moment is gone but the feeling remains and the hurt will stay.
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Re: the first the last
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 10:24:46 PM AEST
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Very well delieverd.
I feel the hurt that remains. |
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Re: the first the last
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 02:38:51 AM AEST
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taylor, this poem is so sad. happy and romantic in the beginning but the end is so sad. its a great write. I can really feel the pain that you wrote about.
luvs ya
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