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He Still Move Me
Contributed by
Lilly-Quill
on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:11:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Enticingly slow, but every so gently, his words are a dance.
How strangely he moves me as no other, with pains stance.
So Ive moved on, taken it to the next lever; just not with him.
He still writes about me, as if my sweet spirit revisits him again.
Strange how love evades, and charades, and shuffles the game.
To him Im a special mystery; while I frown on his methods vain.
Focused I moved on, leaving him; as they say- come what may.
At last I no longer cry at noon, or night, or the middle of the day.
Even though, Father has a new plans, for destiny's true liberty.
And now in my dreams theres one who's intent on courting me.
Still, as if sweet music drifts by, Im slowly drawn to the other.
I wish him whole; if only hed come to Gods Table, like a brother.
Copyright ©
Lilly-Quill
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2006-07-28 00:11:46]
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Re: He Still Move Me
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by emystar on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 12:31:00 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
You go now!
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: He Still Move Me
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by eyes-of-love on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 07:15:48 AM AEST
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| amazing poem.. |
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Re: He Still Move Me
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by FRANCO on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 10:22:01 AM AEST
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a wonderful write.
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Re: He Still Move Me
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by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 01:00:18 AM AEST
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| you have such a way with words.. |
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Re: He Still Move Me
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by Loende on
Wednesday, 22nd October 2008 @ 09:24:53 PM AEST
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Wow, I really liked this one! It's got some great lines, one of which is:
Strange how love evades, and charades, and shuffles the game.
Great job!
Be well,
Loende |
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