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Within This Crowd
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 04:25:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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People pass me by,
Watching me, break and cry,
Im most alone when in this crowd,
Sometimes my silence seems so loud,
My head is hollow, my heart is full,
Thoughts bounce around my empty skull,
I feel my blood begin to curdle,
As I face this final hurdle,
Your love a burden I carry alone,
Trying to find somewhere to rest these bones,
Wishing that life should leave me in peace,
Searching for something; some kind of release,
Minutes are days, hours are weeks,
Happiness something my soul desperately seeks,
Longing for you in the lonely hours of night,
When the shadows set in and I cant find the light,
Needing you more than youll ever know,
For desire is something that words just cant show.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-07-28 16:25:54]
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Re: Within This Crowd
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 05:26:39 AM AEST
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| So sad, know how you feel lovely poem Ruby. xxxxx |
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Re: Within This Crowd
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 09:38:40 AM AEST
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Let see u asked and i quote, Hope You Like It " . No i don't, I loveit . . . that last line is a punch in the stomache. " For desire is something words just can't show. " Simply stunning.
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