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His destany for escape
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 04:45:09 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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He cries
He weeps
So badly he misses her
He was
So full of joy when he saw her
even though
the pain was on-going
he acted so happy
But now
with her gone
the pain is much worse
The pain became
unbearable
He calls her
and says
"I want you to know,
I've always loved you;
and I always will."
No time for a reply
he says his final
good bye
She cries
She weeps
So badly she misses him
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
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2006-07-28 16:45:09]
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Re: His destany for escape
(User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 28th July 2006 @ 06:25:44 PM AEST
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A very sad ending to your write. I believe you should always let that someone special in your life know how much they really mean to you. One never knows what may happen.
A sad, but very well penned poem. Thanks for posting it.
warm hugs,
~*suzie Q*~ |
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Re: His destany for escape
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by Spike on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 06:05:39 AM AEST
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A very competent write about complex emotions and people's motives. That inner pain that drives people to such acts is never eased by love, only time and insight-that is, if they wait that long.
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