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Sterile
Contributed by
daniel
on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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now see what i have, it's a whole lot of nothing.
bold faced lie crying clearly, oh well, it's something.
smell the sewage pouring in...
tastes like pieces i'll regret...
drink deep...
drink deep...
potent potion...
potent potion...
so great.
it's free.
seems dark as this oil hole and still as consistant.
darker than the dreams of old...
darker than when leaving hope...
see what i mean, i mean anything so you hope.
drink deep...
drink deep...
potent potion...
potent potion...
twice daily i've found
beneath all this ground
tallied the facts that will keep me in check intact.
i think you'll forget this, oh yes.
progression substains ignorance.
drink deep...
drink deep...
potent potion...
potent potion...
follow all of your thoughts
subdue every single claw
shredding the smell of the walls to fine powder dust.
***
2/10/03
Copyright ©
daniel
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2003-02-10 23:20:00]
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Re: Sterile
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by Dani on
Monday, 10th February 2003 @ 11:29:00 PM AEST
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ooo, is this ever cyptic!.... no clue as to what you've written about... BUT, it's fun to get lost in your words... hehe... this is REALLY GOOD!! :)
~Dani~
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Re: Sterile
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 01:28:46 AM AEST
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hi daniel,
very deep potion, creative!
emy |
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Re: Sterile
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 02:40:21 AM AEST
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| very cute..venkat |
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