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Atheist II
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 11:10:06 PM in AEST
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Their harsh words
press against my ears
The crushing pain
of their words
makes me grind my teeth
They say
I must
BELIEVE
But I can't
I just can't
Mentally impossible for me right now
He turned his back on when I needed him most
People say to believe
and people also say to not
I'm so confused
At the edge of dieing
he saved me
But when I needed him the most
He abandoned me
so it seemed
Maybe he didn't
Maybe I was too wraped up in
all my emotions
and pain
I pushed him away
I hope
one day
I can figure this all out
maybe that one day is
today
People say to belive
and people say to not
I'm so confused
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
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2006-07-29 23:10:06]
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Re: Atheist II
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by emystar on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 11:45:12 PM AEST
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It's really easy to be confused and it's not up to others to tell you to believe or not.
Just be patient with yourself.
Someday you'll understand.
Hang tuff, you'll get there.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy |
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Re: Atheist II
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by dougnut on
Sunday, 30th July 2006 @ 06:44:10 AM AEST
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I tend to agree with Emy on this.
You have choices .
I have also been confused and angry at times
I often have to be still
The answers do come in time.
Positive thoughts and prayers for you.
Doug :-) |
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Re: Atheist II
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by fielding88 on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 12:21:50 AM AEST
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| It was still a poem written with a good idea. The confusion addressed here leads to answers, of course, and there's a method to all the madness, I'm sure. Regardless, I liked this poem. |
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Re: Atheist II
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by TheLostPuppet on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 12:37:39 AM AEST
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Very well written poem. I also hope you can figure this out. Wich ever path you choose, just know you are never alone.
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Re: Atheist II
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by Lionel on
Monday, 31st July 2006 @ 01:01:17 AM AEST
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Dear "atheist",
There's much confusion in religion today - ( probably always has been). Today they proclaim a God that: "tries to save men, but they want LET him", wishes and hopes they will let Him have His way, etc. This loose and ignorant description of God can hinder a man's belief. That is not the God of Holy Scripture - He does His will in the armies of heaven, and among the inhabitants of the earth, and none can stay His hand, or say unto Him- What doest thou? Dan. 4:35 Also, Read the real " Lord's prayer: John Ch. 17. Matt. 6:9 is the diciples prayer ( they got that wrong too.) God bless you.
Lionel
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