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SALT
Contributed by
Davinah
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Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 03:54:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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It all went up in flames
and my life has gone to hell
I suppose that's how the story goes
when you've got too much of them to tell
I am the one who suffers your ignorance
But when it hurts, you take it out on me
You are the beast inside my paradise
My burden, my demon set free
You are the salt in my wounds
You heat the pins and stab them in
Then you leave me like the others
And I end up alone like I began
Copyright ©
Davinah
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2006-08-01 03:54:19]
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Re: SALT
(User Rating: 1 )
by Craze on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 02:21:16 PM AEST
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| this poem was kinda dark |
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Re: SALT
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 01:46:02 AM AEST
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Davinah~
I have come to enjoy ur writes so much.
This one says alot to me. It's the good ones that get used and always end up getting hurt.
Put this behind you my friend. There are plenty others out there. May u find a real special guy real soon. All the best to u D~
love, hugs n prayers,
suzie Q |
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