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friends or lost aquantinces?
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 11:04:11 AM in AEST
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help me
save me
from my so called friends
who I would say
are actually
lost aquantinces
that are made of a special
glue and spice
the glue
oh that horribly sticky glue
is the memories and small gifts
of when we were friends
but like glue that turns from
liquid to solid
our view of each memorie changed
even though
we have that special spice
its not the same
the spice
that spice that all girls are known to have
has reached the surface of our skins
and poisoned the glue
and made it brittle and weak
till it breaks
he said
oh that girl that's friends with her
I say
no that's her lost aquantince
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2006-08-01 11:04:11]
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Re: friends or lost aquantinces?
(User Rating: 1 )
by dagonet on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 06:18:36 AM AEST
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wow, i really like this one i can really relate to it and seeing it put into words so well is amazing, really liked the way u named the two parts, "glue and spice" then described the meaning of both then linked em back at the end, that was really kool.
another awesome one
ryan xx |
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