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When.........
Contributed by
dawny
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Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 01:46:01 PM in AEST
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Life is what you make it
Isnt that what they say
So what happens when it all goes wrong
And things dont go your way
They also say things happen
But they dont tell you what to do
When all your hopes and dreams crash down
And you havent got a clue
You learn to cope by having to
But that just sounds like crap
When all the things youve worked for
Just end up in your lap
Take each day at a time
What will be will be
But when each days worse than the one before
When do you get to be free?
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dawny
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2006-08-01 13:46:01]
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Re: When.........
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by Silent-No-More on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 06:38:35 PM AEST
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"They" always have so much to say don't they? I don't know, Dawny... I'm sure 'they' are well intended, but yeh... sometimes all those easy answers "just sound like crap" as you said. Truth is... life's just plain hard sometimes. *sigh* Hang in there.
Nice to see you posting again! You have been missed around here. *hug*
Wishing you peace,
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Re: When.........
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 04:17:27 AM AEST
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that's true. I agree.
good write.
luvs ya
jess |
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Re: When.........
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 04:45:52 PM AEST
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i truly love it...how you question the things every one is told...i love it!
great write,
- Bethani - |
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