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A splendid beginning, A journey in love
Contributed by
brew
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Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 08:51:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You started as one, a fagile miss with all to offer
It now has doubled and made it two, with even greater aspects
Feelings flowed and firworks began
Now it sparks and egnites with every day they are near
Heart flutters when they speak a single word
To be together speaking many words explodes all the more
Your eyes would travel until you seen the one
Now they stay in one image that will remain
Being one is independent and in flight
Being two is greatest entwine the soul could find
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love
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by RLWildPassions on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 11:59:53 PM AEST
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| Brew, another great, I like it |
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love
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by Spike on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 09:32:00 PM AEST
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Yes, Brew, public declarations of love via marriage are powerful rites of passage and forge already strong emotions. That's why marriage as a ceremony and as a social institution is making a comeback, despite the ease with which it can be undone. I've done it twice, and I'm sure I'll do it again.
Yours in ever hopeful,
Spike |
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 02:57:24 PM AEST
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aw Dayna, what a sweet sentiment for your friend.
She is lucky to have you! : )
Beautifully captured, these feelings of togetherness ..
*hugs*
~Breezy |
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love
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by Jeff_Scott_Morehead on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 01:20:36 PM AEST
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Excellent write.
Beautifully written~
Jeff |
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:23:16 PM AEST
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That's fantastic Dayna.. congrats to your girlfriend.. I'm sure she's proud to have this and you.
B |
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love
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by jyssvw22 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 07:27:37 PM AEST
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”Your eyes would travel until you seen the one
Now they stay in one image that will remain”
aint that the truth, you see something and you want it, nothing else will do, or matters for the moment
nice words
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Re: A splendid beginning, A journey in love
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by MILLER_GENUINE_SWINE on
Thursday, 19th April 2007 @ 04:56:52 AM AEST
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| WOW IF I KEEP READING THESE I MIGHT ACTUALLY START WRITTING BETTER |
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