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Contributed by
chaos78
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Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 12:31:22 AM in AEST
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I slow dance with the devil
in the pale light moon
my mind focus on death
for he will be here soon
to collect what he is owe
I prepaid my toll
for I know I would
walk down this road
for this pain just consume
and I try so hard
but I dont know what to do
Im in a state of confusion
awaiting my doom
my eyes can only see my end
this is my world I live in
I lost all control and slipped
dam when did I get this twitch
my body has grown cold
my soul has let go
as I free fall to my end
tired of living
this life
of sin
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2006-08-02 00:31:22]
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 02:28:25 PM AEST
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so emotional and sad touched with a blinding darkness to it. you did a great job with this write indeed.
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:34:05 PM AEST
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When the will dies and all hope is lost, we tend to feel like this. Such sadness and deep darkness speak from our wounded hearts. Chin up friend. I wish u all the best. A very sad, but well penned write that digs at the heart~
take care, warm hugs,
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