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Cost of the Cat
Contributed by
girish
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Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 07:41:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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The helpless woman appealed to the divine If I get a child, I give you my hairs anytime To commit to her words, she was uncertain She gave few hairs that touched the spine
The wealthy businessman came by a ship Violent storms made the travel a hardship I will donate the poor, was his worship To donate, I sell my house, he told in a sip
The ship sailed safely coming to the shore His thoughts perplexed even to sell his door His house will really worth more than a crore But announced to sell his house in a roar
Fixed the price of his house as one rupee All had come to buy the house in a spree His condition was to buy his cat not for free Fixed the price of his cat, hard to agree
Selling his house and cat, he donated 1 rupee Committing to his words, he thought he is free Ask from the lord, not all that you see If you have given the layman, give it to me.
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girish
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2006-08-02 07:41:57] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Cost of the Cat
(User Rating: 1 ) by tres_estrellas on
Monday, 17th November 2008 @ 05:29:48 AM AEST (User
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I like how you seem to have made it into a real story. I liked it. Different. Rhymes well :) |
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Re: Cost of the Cat
(User Rating: 1 ) by Adam on
Tuesday, 18th November 2008 @ 12:38:57 AM AEST (User
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Some really great ideas here. |
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