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Rhythm Of Love
Contributed by
FRANCO
on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 09:53:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Drumming drops of water
brushing fresh breeze; shyly
tossing heads of wet blissful
blossom, at par to
the vision I knew.
Colliding zealous eyes
sang volumes of
roaring love-phrases,
holding hands warmly
watched the rain, dance
to the music of our beating
hearts - rose and fell to
the rhythm of love.
Distant thunder merged
us, as pearls of perspiration
rolled.
pouring pure streams of rain,
tickled united souls to snigger.
-FRANCO-
Copyright ©
FRANCO
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2006-08-02 09:53:23]
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Re: Rhythm Of Love
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by In_a_while on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:15:56 AM AEST
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amazing form and rhythm!! i think the imagery and
playful use of words does wonders for the eyes and
ears... keep it up!
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Re: Rhythm Of Love
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 10:20:51 AM AEST
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Talk about capturing the moment ... a beautiful picture you've painted here, my friend FRANCO, with your usual and typical mastery!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Rhythm Of Love
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 11:15:32 AM AEST
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A wonderful write, Franco...
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Re: Rhythm Of Love
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 02:16:37 PM AEST
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a delightful read, rainshowers and lovers equals pure bliss.
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Re: Rhythm Of Love
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by fielding88 on
Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 03:41:38 PM AEST
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| This was very pleasant, I found myself enjoying how this was put together. Lovely descriptions and just a nice write all around. |
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Re: Rhythm Of Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 01:23:10 AM AEST
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Franco~
A most pleasant and enjoyable write. You have beautifully penned this together and I have to say you have done an excellent job with it too. A magnificient and very well penned poem. Thanks so much for sharing it with us Franco~
warm hugs,
suzie Q |
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Re: Rhythm Of Love
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by Clarity_Rising on
Thursday, 18th January 2007 @ 01:26:51 PM AEST
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This poem flows like a
song. I love the tempo of
your writing. Simply
beautiful!
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