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Dreams
Contributed by
quiggles
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Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 03:14:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Dreams of sailing away
ocean open and wide
White water up and spray
but dreams are dreams
and as BoB says low tide
The time is here
and your over there
Had you then
but need you now
Seems dreams arent tangible
but for hours in the night
I try so hard to drift off
to my own nirvana
Trying becomes so trite
for hours in the night
Id kill
for everything I Love
You know them well
Im forgetting-still
Cant help but dwell
So why cant I die
Or is this already Hell?
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quiggles
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2006-08-03 15:14:54]
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Re: Dreams
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by kaitee on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 05:35:48 PM AEST
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aww...i'm sorry this happened. love has the potential to be a very painful thing..especially when one "runs away with your heart"..
good write, tho..very emotional
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Re: Dreams
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by Novatux on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:26:32 PM AEST
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I know how you feel, similar has happened to me and dwelling just made it harder.
Very nice write, the ending was superb.
I hope the happiness you had with her, returns.
Chin up, yeah? |
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Re: Dreams
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by brew on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:37:24 PM AEST
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Dreams are beautiful, and sometimes float away. Sorry the one took your heart, yet......do you know all behind the fall?! Sometimes, we cant answer why the one you love does what they do.......And sometimes, they do not even know.! So many differ questions can be asked, yet you need to find the answer. I do agree with Nova, on their comment.! SMile......for it does make it easier to go on.
Brew~ |
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