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A Part Of Me
Contributed by
Novatux
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Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:12:36 PM in AEST
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You're all I think of all day long,
When my mind is set at rest,
You're that part of me that makes me whole,
It's something you can't express,
You probably can't even hear me but that's okay,
Please don't stress,
I know you'd feel the same way too,
If you didn't sit on my desk.
You're smarter than anyone I know,
You're full of magnificence,
But you couldn't tell an Ant from a Horse,
It's like you have no common-sense,
Well I suppose that is true in a way,
Just do not take offence,
You're reading as I write this poem,
It's like I have no common-sense...
When it's day I turn you on,
I must be good at this,
When it's night I turn you off,
All of a sudden I'm bad at this,
You've got to have some rest my love,
Right now you are dis-missed,
Because without you, my awesome computer, Tss,
I couldn't of wrote this.
I love my computer, lol.
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Novatux
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Re: A Part Of Me
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by brew on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:25:03 PM AEST
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I loved it..........What a totally differ write,...You begin, reading and thinking its to a inner heart love, and then.BAM...its about ur pc.! Hilarious, and cute.!
Write more like this......Cute and funny diddies brighten ones nite.
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Re: A Part Of Me
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by shelby on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 08:47:12 PM AEST
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First of all welcome to YPDC!
You had me going with this write.
Very nice imagination and so creative.
I really enjoyed it and needed that smile today.
Michelle |
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Re: A Part Of Me
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 3rd August 2006 @ 10:26:50 PM AEST
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Wonderfully done... I'm sure lots of us here can identify...
Welcome to YPDC... Hope to see more of your work...
Jenni |
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Re: A Part Of Me
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 01:21:14 AM AEST
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A big warm welcome to YPDC. I do hope you enjoy it here. An awesome first submission.
What a twist and what a write. I thoroughly enjoyed this from the beginning to the end. You draw in ur reader thinking they are gonna read a love, heartfelt write, but far from it. I have to say you definately put a smile on m face. Thanks so much for posting this. I hope to venture ur pages again real soon.
A top write, keep it up.
Take care
love n hugs,
suzie Q
PS Thanx so much for the comment on my poem. I deeply appreciate it :-) |
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