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Shot
Contributed by
kirankaur
on
Friday, 4th August 2006 @ 12:27:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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The shouts, the screams, the shrieks
All drowned out by my everlasting grief.
I fell to my knees with a thud,
No pain,
Little blood,
Helpless.
Tears shot down my cheek,
Just as a bullet had took him from me
Breathless.
My mouth opened a scream,
So loud,
So deafening,
Desperate.
My heart wounded just as his,
But mine still beating.
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kirankaur
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2006-08-04 12:27:19]
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Re: Shot
(User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 08:13:33 AM AEST
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This poem reflects a painful experience.
”My heart wounded just as his,
But mine still beating.”
A beautiful expression that shot my heart as well.
Welcome to YPDC friend.
Regards,
FRANCO
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Re: Shot
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by Man_On_High on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 09:27:20 PM AEST
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this is utterly painful.. and so realistic-
I was there in this, when the shot was fired.
Prayers and condolences..truly-
Billy
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