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Hate.
Contributed by
ham323
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Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 07:40:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
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It fills me to the rim and pours out of me like a river.
I hate you so much, in the night I shiver.
Youre eyes so innocent, yet so full of lies.
I laugh at your pain, my ecstacy is your cries.
If I could feel your bones crushing at my will.
It still wouldnt be enough I need more, to kill.
I hear your voice, and my ears begin to bleed.
Youre my poison, youre everything I dont need.
You push me until my blood boils, I feel atomic.
I see your smile and I scream until I vomit.
Im always on edge, ready at whatever the cost.
I want to return the pain, everything I ever lost.
You took away my sanity, my happiness, my life.
My hate for you runs deep, and is as sharp as a knife.
Gnawing at my insides is what you do best.
You take and take, you torture and take the rest.
I have an undying wish to see you burn.
Burn for an eternity, your never ending turn.
Ill claw out your eyes and torture your soul.
Its time you learn from your ways, time to pay the toll.
Your death will be the best day Ill ever see.
Ill be there to see your end, smiling at your misery.
Theres nothing else Id be happier to have.
Than your cold dead heart, diminishing in my wrath.
Your birth was the worst day of my life.
And your death will be the best, I will have no strife.
God must hate me, because here you are.
Living with the Devil, hes made his scar.
Of all the lives you could have ruined, you picked mine.
What the hell could I have done, you are so unkind.
A never ending hate, I will have for you.
My revenge on your soul, will never be through.
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ham323
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Re: Hate.
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 5th August 2006 @ 10:55:01 PM AEST
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| This brought quite a number of tears to my eyes. There is only one person in this world that I hate, so I felt this one greatly |
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Re: Hate.
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by AnastasiaN on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 12:32:56 PM AEST
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| this poem chills me to the bone because i felt every bit of the hatred you described. i've felt this way about more than one person and it hasn't gone away...i hope that this hatred doesn't consume you however because i feel that its starting to get the better of me now... |
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Re: Hate.
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by snowflake on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 04:55:55 PM AEST
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thanks for the comment on Over you it was greatly appreciated i really enjoyed this poem i could really relate
*~SnowFLAKE~* |
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Re: Hate.
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by midian on
Tuesday, 8th August 2006 @ 03:01:13 AM AEST
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| this has touched me as it made me reflect on some of the things i have done! i also feel that hate.... such a dark and powerful write |
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