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A Night at the Soccer Field
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 07:43:43 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Step out of my car and onto the gravel.
Hear it crunch as you and I walk across it,
to the abandoned soccer field.
As we take our spot in the middle of the field,
help me count the stars.
We fall fast asleep in each others arms,
and dream of each other,
until I am awakened by a single raindrop.
So I kiss you to wake you.
As the rain begins to fall harder,
you kiss me back.
And say only four words.
'Make love to me.'
So we do.
With the thunder and lightning,
as our copulating music.
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thepizzaguy
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2006-08-06 19:43:43]
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Re: A Night at the Soccer Field
(User Rating: 1 )
by maggot on
Tuesday, 21st October 2008 @ 09:26:21 PM AEST
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it is good but not as good as the first one "shopping mall dream" but keep writing the series looking forward to wats next.
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