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the release
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 09:04:08 PM in AEST
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I kept you a prisoner, in a gulded cage,
I kept you locked up, fed on fear and rage,
tormented with emotion,I never let you sleep,
I caused you pain and suffering, until I made you weep,
then one day compasion, for you filled my heart,
I realized the day had come, for you and I to part,
I opened up the door,watched as you flew free,
the burden of your suffering, a sudden weight of me,
Goodbye sweet bird, my little bird of pain,
fly into the world your part of it again,
you flew into the sky. the sun shone on your wings,
yes my little bird, you deserve better things,
I had kept you prisoner, on fear watched you grow,
yet its me who is free, now Ive let you go,
sometimes I hear you near, hear your flapping wings,
sorry little bird, I can not let you in...
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Re: the release
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by lillyjane on
Sunday, 6th August 2006 @ 09:10:23 PM AEST
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| OoopsThat should be guilded cage, missed out the i.. |
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Re: the release
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 01:27:49 AM AEST
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It happens.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: the release
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by emystar on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 01:28:11 AM AEST
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It happens.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: the release
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 02:56:57 AM AEST
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| Well done, feelings should not kept locked away. They make us what we are. You have put it so beautifully. It shows a good heart. I am glad my friend you are free. Take care Sue xx |
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Re: the release
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 03:27:32 AM AEST
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Very gently penned poem of the sometimes hard facts of life. You've written a very nice poem here and I can relate to it very much.
Thank you.
Tim
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Re: the release
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by shelby on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 01:11:42 PM AEST
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Incredible write Lilly. Yes setting long times free is the very hardest thing to do. Our society teaches us to bottle up wear the mask, well to hell with the mask let it go fly with the wind! I'm glad that you made this step, what a happy experience it is to have the weight lifted. We walk with a lighter step.
hugsssssss
Michelle |
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Re: the release
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 01:25:07 PM AEST
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| Let your little bird fly Lillyjane. Excellent! |
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Re: the release
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 06:37:23 PM AEST
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Oh the beauty and wonder of emancipation!!
Excellent metaphor lillyjane. So glad you let
your little bird fly~
Wise and sound advice : )
~Breezy |
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