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That Cold March Day
Contributed by
justme03
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Monday, 7th August 2006 @ 03:55:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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fingers numb.
bright red ears.
leaves crunching beneath
our feet.
just you and i
having another sister
conversation--
i let down my guard
but only for a little bit.
we walked around the concrete
path in the park as we talked.
we talked of delaney
(she wasn't named back then).
i can't wait until she is born!
birth. . .such a beautiful word
of new beginnings and joy.
the wind started to howl.
i remember the bitter
cold as i break down
and tell you about
something
i lost that afternoon.
it wasn't the whole truth,
but just enough. . .
when delaney is born, do you
think i can be reborn with love
and forget what happened
on that cold march day?
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2006-08-07 15:55:17]
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Re: That Cold March Day
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by midian on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 05:02:01 AM AEST
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| it disturbs me that no-one has cared to comment on such a topic... i can relate unfortunatly... as sadly there are sick sad sad people in our world.. i hope you do find your "rebirt" quickly and peacefully it can take its toll when you never let go of a thing like that...! nice poem heartfelt |
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Re: That Cold March Day
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 29th August 2006 @ 05:21:21 PM AEST
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I'm truly sorry to hear about that...May you be reborn with a happy heart.
-Channing- |
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