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Assumed Guilt
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 05:58:25 PM in AEST
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Libra weighs the balances
Of deed versus effect
While pros and cons wage battle
Debate recent deficit
A judge then granting recess
To his chambers will retreat
Leave to the jurys ponderment
If subject is complete
There seem some missing pieces
Inconclusive evidence
The man who stands on trial
Speaks now in his own defense
Sometimes some things happen
Circumstance beyond control
Often times with reasons that
We seem not meant to know
If I should be convicted
Or accountable, be held
For destiny, or chance, or fate
Then look upon yourselves
For each of you have acted now
In ways you cant deny
For every act you cant explain
Youd be as guilty then as I
~ Nazmythian ~
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Re: Assumed Guilt
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 06:13:59 PM AEST
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Exceptional dearest nazzy!!
A perfectly penned thought, with much wisdom
and fortitude here. And, I would have to agree
wholeheartedly with the last two stanzas.
let he who is without sin and all that ..
The flow was impeccable, as always.
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Re: Assumed Guilt
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 9th August 2006 @ 11:25:51 PM AEST
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Wow, what great wisdom you have shown in this write. Excellent Job.
sadaddy
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Re: Assumed Guilt
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 10:13:01 AM AEST
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OOOooo Naz, very good write. I'm with Breezy, the flow was wonderful and those last two lines classic. *clapping*.
Peace man,
Laura |
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Re: Assumed Guilt
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by ever1der on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 05:44:59 PM AEST
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| hmmmmm....it's a wonderful write but I don't wanna think about guilt right now if it's all the sme to you lol. |
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Re: Assumed Guilt
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 10th August 2006 @ 10:42:00 PM AEST
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I agree with what Breezy said.
anyways Nazzy were here for you.
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Re: Assumed Guilt
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:35:49 AM AEST
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"Judge wisely, lest ye be judged." said as well as it can be said. Powerful, Naz.
wabl
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Re: Assumed Guilt
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by Willofree on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 10:47:50 AM AEST
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Naz,
You speak to a very worthy topic. I wrote one of my newspaper articles on being judgemental. Perhaps an attitude of guilty until proven innocent. Or the words spoken...."Let he who is without sin cast the first stone...." While, as you point out, we are all guilty of being judgemental at times. However, there are those who continually judge or blame others.
Very well done, my friend. Very creative format
Will/Terry |
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