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The Render Of Her Stupidity
Contributed by
lilch4ever
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Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 01:12:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Written By: C. N. Young
Built in desires could light fires of destruction.
Stupidity could rear its ugly head.
Unknown things could glide into existence.
The quiver fear of a broken standard.
At the core of your words a seed is born.
A victim of your own words.
A written story chooses you as the leading character.
And, a story becomes real life no longer a made up story.
The differences shift but the gears remain the same.
A solid heart turns cold and the blood froze solid.
The let down of oneself.
A scar embedded premenantly.
And, a bond maybe undone.
A single act of a blind heart.
The layers of dust settle and shock takes over.
The worry that everything would fade and that everything
would return to it once was.
That a broken standard could be undone.
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lilch4ever
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2006-08-11 01:12:37]
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Re: The Render Of Her Stupidity
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 11:02:27 AM AEST
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very interesting.. I liked the flow and liked the wording.. very expressive write.. I like that that paragraph.. its really worded perfectly..
some people have no hearts and put stupid standards on people which is wrong. but awesome write
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