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My Troubled Mind
Contributed by
stellar
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Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 08:56:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Lost and alone
In a world not my own
So much before me
That's left unknown
Contractions of actions
Concerning my heart
The last sense of peace
Is falling apart
Nothing is fitting and nothing belongs
Not enough time to right all my wrongs
Talentless writing
Keeps pen to the page
Until I escape
The last fit of my rage
It's chaotic and senseless
And I can't find the end
My body is breaking
The farther it bends
The remains are scattered all over the lawn
But the chaos won't stop it'll keep going on...
Copyright ©
stellar
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2006-08-11 20:56:25]
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Re: My Troubled Mind
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by frmpoison2static on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:49:50 PM AEST
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| very good poem..i could really relate to it. |
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Re: My Troubled Mind
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 05:08:34 AM AEST
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Very true. Good work.
Ya jus gotta learn to chill out.
This is the best way I know is bleed it thru the pen.
Awesome writing.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: My Troubled Mind
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by CaddishCut on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:27:00 PM AEST
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| One of the best flowing poems I've read on here in a while. Very well thought out. |
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