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Savage Enlightenment
Contributed by
surrealsenses
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Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:26:45 PM in AEST
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Something to appease my curiousity and discomfort.
Some deep vibration violating all sense of being and acceptance.
A push, on to the path of epiphanies and contradictions
Winding my way down to the complete castration of reality.
To sever my line of connection to conformity; catastrophic compulsions!
To be particles of pieces, pulsating without rythum or recognition.
Peace...
Overtake me, pervert my being!
Massacre this feigned existence!
Slowly I subside into a savage stage of enlightenment.
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surrealsenses
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2006-08-11 22:26:45]
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Re: Savage Enlightenment
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by Spike on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 10:49:34 PM AEST
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hello SS,
It looks like we are in the same mindset on reality and perception, and the welcome anomie of the world beyond the veil of our senses. Your post could also be read on a number of situational or personal levels,as well as metaphysical/existential. Terrific first post.
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Re: Savage Enlightenment
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by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 04:45:44 AM AEST
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I can already tell your writing has mucho power behind it.
Leaves one scratching ones head and saying HUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMNNNNNNNNNNN?
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Savage Enlightenment
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by candysears on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 03:09:44 PM AEST
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Great write..Powerful..Very deep...
Masterpiece..
God Bless! |
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