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We're always there!
Contributed by
lowman613
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Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 05:20:00 PM in AEST
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I wish I could hold you till your a man,
make all the bad go away,
teach you things to understand,
why things happen today,
Tell you right from wrong,
so you know how to treat others,
always know whats going on,
with you & your brother,
I worry about you every day,
learning to succeed,
for you to listen to what I say,
its information that you'll need,
I dont want you to think I'm mean,
just that I care,
will you know when your a teen,
that I was always there?
The road to life in hard & long,
so I want the best for both of you,
to do the right things instead of wrong,
and learn in all that you do,
I want to sheild you from fear,
& hide it all from you,
mommy & daddy will be right here,
no matter what you do,
We will be friends some day,
you can always come to me,
I will listen to what you have to say,
the best parents we can be!
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lowman613
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Re: We're always there!
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 05:49:08 PM AEST
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| beautifully written Christina, things will turn out right, |
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Re: We're always there!
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by Wrybod on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 07:36:15 PM AEST
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Llw ans13
So much is stacked against you these days. There's so much commercialism giving our children false gods to worhsip juat to make money out of them.
It was very different in the twenties and thirties when I grew up we looked to our parents.
Now they become slaves to whatever is the latest "craze". It's more important to have the latest "thing" than any "old fashioned" principles.
Your poem is a tender insight into being a mother. |
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Re: We're always there!
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by spooky on
Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 07:57:13 PM AEST
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i wish my parents would have been there for me,,always tell your children,,that you love them
thats something that they will never forget,,mommy loves us both,,but to be careful,,on how you shield them,,they need o learn from tere mistakes,,but dont be to hard on them,,there still learning,,a friend in words,,spooky |
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Re: We're always there!
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by venkat on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 05:32:24 AM AEST
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| very much caring mother..a lovely poem. venkat |
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Re: We're always there!
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 07:38:57 PM AEST
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| ahhh they are so sweet when they are little, enjoy them, they will always know you love them, huggs and happy valentines day, nessa |
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Re: We're always there!
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by LadyDama on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 12:40:05 AM AEST
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| what a wonderful way to tell your children how much they mean to you... inspiring and oh so necessary in today's world... what a wonderful mother you must be :) |
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Re: We're always there!
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by riverofwords on
Saturday, 15th February 2003 @ 07:40:18 AM AEST
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hi ,yuo beautifully summed up a parents love inthis work
i loved it ...awesome
peace be your journey
terry |
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