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Alive
Contributed by
Franciswolf
on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 11:51:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
surreal
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Alive like the surgeons knife
Creating and destroying
Healing and Hurting,
Tearing and releasingyou are alive,
Can you hear me son; youre alive
I brought a world out to my friends
That some dont claim exists
But Ive seen it before and I needed to follow it
I was so afraid of where it would lead
Its still like walking on a battered down bridge that falls into inspiration
Collapsing while connecting
Falling while being collected,
Dying but being rebornyou are born
Can you hear me son; youre born
Being one with all you feel
Taking in what will eventually reveal you
Being stolen by your prime and emptied out
Youre poured over everything, its something called infinity
Hello world, I will destroy you
Hello self, I will embrace you
Hello fate, I will ignore you
Hello animals, I will hunt you
Hello muse, I will ***** you
I brought a world out to my friends
That some dont claim exists
But Ive seen it before and I needed to follow it
I was so afraid of where it would lead
Where are you taking me?
Where are you taking me?
Is the company that free?
Oh son, where are you taking me?
Dont be the end of me
Copyright ©
Franciswolf
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2006-08-11 23:51:41]
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Re: Alive
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 01:41:59 AM AEST
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I like the re-embellishing of the second strophe in the sixth. Intriguing.
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Re: Alive
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by candysears on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 03:05:22 PM AEST
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Very well written....
God Bless! |
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