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The Worm
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 08:41:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Last night I had the strangest dream, I had turned into a worm, A long thin slimy creature, The very idea makes me squirm,
But then I thought about it, It didn't seem so grim, Thinking good ,no haircuts, And no trips to the gym,
I would have no money worries, No nine to five work toil, Well I would be in clover, With plenty of grass and soil,
No worries about how I look, It would be perfect bliss, No cares about my size or shape, Or if my bum looks big in this,
So I have come to the conclusion, There is something we can learn, Appearance isn't everything, Not when you are a worm!
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jerseysue
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Re: The Worm
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 09:19:54 AM AEST (User
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Very cute, my brit buddy - and fun to read! Brought a big smile to m' face. Another thing, ya don't even have t' translate "Or if my bum looks big in this," Great work!
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Re: The Worm
(User Rating: 1 ) by chaos78 on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 12:20:33 PM AEST (User
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cute it put a simle on my face 2 good write |
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Re: The Worm
(User Rating: 1 ) by candysears on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 12:33:20 PM AEST (User
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A true concept...But yet funny...
Wonderful write...
God Bless! |
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Re: The Worm
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 10:56:08 PM AEST (User
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Cute, my friend.
Jus let's up they don't end up on a fishing line then down someones tumy.
hugs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: The Worm
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 02:11:16 PM AEST (User
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A creative enjoyable read made me smail indeed.
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Re: The Worm
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 02:11:58 PM AEST (User
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mm that should have been smile am not quite awake yet was a long night lol
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Re: The Worm
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 11:22:26 AM AEST (User
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Very funny love it..xxx
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