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The Killer- Hero
Contributed by
shinji_kusa
on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 07:41:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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Some did write,
Elongated lines,
About the man,
Who sat unrefined,
Maddened some said,
By weeks at a time,
Of no sleep and no dreams,
No release for his mind,
Once hed been great,
His deeds known to all,
But one fateful night,
Did he take a great fall,
He had a dream so vivid,
Some thought it a vision,
Through a serial killers eyes,
As he concluded his mission,
The hero became frightful,
Of ever closing his eyes,
So he stayed awake for weeks,
Blacking out at sunrise,
There he lingered,
In the hospital for loons,
Until once again he was called for,
And not a moment too soon.
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2006-08-12 19:41:30]
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Re: The Killer- Hero
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:21:52 PM AEST
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| I crazily enjoyed this..lol. I really like the way you are able to rhyme..I would say creepily good. |
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