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thought comes to mind
Contributed by
crazyn
on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Thought comes to mind
Here we are seated
Amidst natural beauty
I cant get my eyes off you
I can see two birds
Just like me and you
Nestling in joy
Perhaps counting their eggs
Thought comes to mind
Thats life
The coming together of two souls
To create another little life
But do we want to bring that life in this wicked world
We will make sure it stays away from all the evils
Changing
That is bad for a better tomorrow
A group of ducks float
In aspiration to reach the other side of the pond
Thought comes to mind
Thats life
The urge to be the best
If at first you fail
Then you spend the rest in hope
In hope that you will beat the best
The eagle in the sky casts its wicked eye over the young chickens
The hen spreads its wings over its little ones
Until the eagle disappears
Thought comes to mind
Thats life
The will to love your offspring
And the wicked people who lead
Lead your children to Drugs
For their gain
At the end its just your loss
Im out now
Of my bubble
I respect those who respect themselves
Im still staring at your eyes
Just in case this moment never comes back
Copyright ©
crazyn
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2006-08-13 12:10:05]
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Re: thought comes to mind
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by Saloni on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:39:22 PM AEST
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| i love this poem! it has so much nature and beauty expressing how u feel.. its just too goood!! i love u baby xX |
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Re: thought comes to mind
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by frmpoison2static on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 04:27:00 PM AEST
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| i like the parallels to nature and love...nice job. |
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Re: thought comes to mind
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by zeppchic420 on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:20:15 PM AEST
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| nice imagery |
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Re: thought comes to mind
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by wizard on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 08:16:26 AM AEST
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very nice!!
wiz |
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