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Seperating Destinies
Contributed by
saloni
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Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:32:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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Every second makes a minute,
Every minute makes an hour,
Every hour makes a day,
As these days pass by,
Im always trying to be by your side
Knowing whats right and wrong,
I dont want to know,
As long as Im with you,
Knowing youre with me too.
If we are together, why am I so afraid?
I dont want to lose you,
I want to be with you,
I just feel insecure, I need your support.
Why does converting come up all the time, does it matter?
Religion means everything to you,
For me, youre everything
Because of this religion existing,
Our destination separates while it should not be segregating
Why not compromise?
Why is this worlds belief so typical?
Thats my question
Following the path of this journey is so difficult,
Knowing this worlds beliefs is so stereotypical
Love happens with anyone.
All the fingers are not the same,
Nor are dogs tails
Why not compromise to our decision?
Dont you want to see us happy?
We are leaving it to our destiny,
See what it brings to us..
Part 2
If our destinies dont meet,
Our love will always remain for each other,
If we are apart,
Dont forget my love as day go by,
Dont judge my love, as it will always be by your side,
Dont think youre alone in this world to be hatred,
While it means nothing, so dont be frustrated,
***** happens so face it,
Dont be hurt,
It should be eliminated.
You know I want you,
Love you,
Lets face it
I wanna stick to you, I mean it,
But it will be hard for us to be with.
Destiny is that we have no control of,
We will try to be together no matter what
Copyright ©
saloni
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2006-08-13 12:32:19]
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Re: Seperating Destinies
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by crazyn on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 12:54:19 PM AEST
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| powerfull piece of literature, shows contrast from your previous poem. good read. |
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Re: Seperating Destinies
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by emystar on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 01:22:15 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Wise words here.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Seperating Destinies
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 09:05:36 PM AEST
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| Intersting poem..the seperation..and the subject made me think. Love vs. religion..hmmmmm. |
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Re: Seperating Destinies
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by shaba_11 on
Wednesday, 20th September 2006 @ 04:13:20 AM AEST
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| Yo, sick guy saloni. Nicely written. Dont worry, time will come up with a decision. Well done. I didnt knew you wrote poems. Why dont you post some more? |
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