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Truth
Contributed by
kellycat
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Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 07:42:35 PM in AEST
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The only truth she heard was lies
Nobody heard her longing cries
For her, nobody felt a bit sorry
Nobody heard her side of the story
But then she realized because of her youth
That nobody ever told her the truth
From the real world, she was forever rejected
The simple problem....she was overprotected
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Re: Truth
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 13th August 2006 @ 08:53:19 PM AEST
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| the rhyme is rocky in places, but this poem has a lot of wisdom in it. I enjoyed it. |
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Re: Truth
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by Vampirequeen on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 12:36:43 AM AEST
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Hmm i disagree i thought it went very well
I enjoy reading it
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Truth
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by pooja on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2008 @ 01:19:05 PM AEST
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| hey ! Although this comment is coming really late but this is great stuff...good things come in all sizes :) its beautifully simple yet succinct and complete.keep up the good work ... |
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