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Fool
Contributed by
Nirvana12
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Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 01:22:04 PM in AEST
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I built a country and made it out of dirt. I built my house right on the sand. I scaled a mountain to say i did it first. I went and looked for the streets made out of gold, they turned out to be regular bricks and stone.I went to look around for god but all I found was air. I talked to the homeless, thought i would feel great until i found them to be much wiser than me.
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Re: Fool
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by frmpoison2static on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 05:05:07 PM AEST
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| short but good...i like the last part about the homeless...lol..keep it up. |
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Re: Fool
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by drtylilsecret on
Monday, 14th August 2006 @ 11:12:57 PM AEST
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most fools don't know when they're being stupid but.....you must be one of those smart fools. short and sweet. well more like bitter, but it was a good write.
~talli
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Re: Fool
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by shinji_kusa on
Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 02:52:29 PM AEST
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interesting to say the least lol, i guess this displays the unexpected empyty feeling people get after doing stuff, quests u might call them or good deeds.
-jason |
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Re: Fool
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 11:02:01 AM AEST
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A brilliant write..Funny..Very creative i must say..
Blessings!
C.S |
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