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Amber Dreams
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Tuesday, 15th August 2006 @ 11:35:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
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There is a land beneath the wind
for you to walk through, my near inaccessible love~
..aquamarine waves, your chariot
and clouds to move as shadows
about your lovely uplifted face.
Surf will frolic among the off-shore pace of toothy rocks..
imperturbable music to our dreaming,
happy and lost in this new day of freedom..
exquisite on our silent tongues.
Between sky and sea and sand is written,
in broad and brilliant asteriks: the truth~
closing a journey that led us perfectly towards morning..
the thought briefly and forever in a puzzled chance.
The rocks will not hurt your feet
and so I ask that you come running down the singing shore~
stepping smiling and sure, out of that cold clear morning,
into my dream of dreams.
B
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 12:03:41 AM AEST
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Wow Billy
your really good at this kind of writes
i am quite impress.
aquamarine waves, your chariot
and clouds to move as shadows
about your lovely uplifted face.
beautiful
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by Benny14 on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:21:53 AM AEST
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| i really liked the imagery and flow bud, the sentiment was also extremely uplifting, at least thats what i get from it. excellent stuff |
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:40:22 AM AEST
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| Its so beautiful, cant understand why you have not got loads of comments, has everyone gone on holiday. its a brilliant poem. xxxx |
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 05:58:04 AM AEST
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Wonderful arrangement of sonics in L1 of S3, very pleasing assonance and consonance. The rest aint to shabby either, thanks for the read,
larkspur |
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 07:18:46 PM AEST
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What a completely soft, tender and alluring write!
Your gentle heart is showing, dearest Billy~
my advice is never stop dreaming .. these are the thoughts
by which our desires manifest themselves into reality ..
Breathtakingly beautiful.
The last stanza is especially gorgeous!!
Affectionately and with much love,
~Breezy
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by jyssvw22 on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 10:56:53 AM AEST
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Yup...i was in fantasy land there for a minute myself…magical...would be the best word to describe this.
Nice as always
Dream away
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by wizard on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 07:01:23 PM AEST
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nicely done bro,
for what do we have (you and i especially!!) if not for mere dreams!
i love it!
wiz |
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Re: Amber Dreams
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by Keilantra on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 03:39:42 PM AEST
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the second and fourth stanzs were just so
nice.
xXx
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