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Mirror Mirror on the Wall
Contributed by
Shattered_soul
on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 12:44:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Mirror mirror on the wall
Whos the damndest of them all
Should I win
Or should I fail
Will I meet myself in hell
Seeing me
With those horns
Just a little demon
Looking back at me
A face like mine
But thats it
Everything we have in common
You a hater
Me a lesbian
You just nobody
Me with failed dreams
You a mirror
A complexion of me
Mirror mirror on the wall
I wish I hadnt looked into you at all.
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Re: Mirror Mirror on the Wall
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by sadaddy on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 01:11:40 AM AEST
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The hurt and pain that you feel is expressed very well in this write. Please to pick yourself up, dust yourself, and feel good about yourself of who you are and not what everyone can see on the outside. It's what is on the inside that really matters. Take care .
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Re: Mirror Mirror on the Wall
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by The_Unknown on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:22:14 AM AEST
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this is a fantastic write. you express ur feelings well and it flows really good.
good job. thank u so much 4 sharing : )
luvs ya!
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Re: Mirror Mirror on the Wall
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by Drapes on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 08:58:42 AM AEST
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Oh wow I really like this! You expressed your feelings well and it has a nice flow. I'm sorry you feel this way about yourself. I know what it's like to look into that mirror and... well, I think you know the rest. I wish the best for you!
Take care,
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