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MY LIFE...
Contributed by
The_Unknown
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Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:58:38 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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my life
is
nothing
my thaughts are
just words
my words are just
thaughts that could never be
my soal is
hanging over the firey depths of hell
my mind is in a fortress
my body is dieing
and
my life is nothing
once you're born you start dieing
what's the point?
I am a person
that can not share their thaughts with others
my thaughts are longing to come out
they want to be real
but they should go to hell
burn and die till it fries your head in hell
they want to come out
they need to explode
once in a while
a few come bursting out
and burning those they aim for
most thaughts are too confusing
people just don't understand
I might just explode
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2006-08-16 02:58:38]
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Re: MY LIFE...
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 07:51:29 AM AEST
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let it out more understand then you think
nice write keep writing thank for sharing |
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Re: MY LIFE...
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 12:28:04 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry you feel this way.
Hang tuff my friend.
Just keep writing, you'll get there.
Luv, big huggs,
emy
I'm always here for you. |
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Re: MY LIFE...
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by JockPhillips on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 11:48:21 AM AEST
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| I like this poem here. Don't ever stop reaching for the good--you're doing good. |
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Re: MY LIFE...
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by TheLostPuppet on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 01:37:31 PM AEST
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im sorry you feel this way about yourself.
i like the poem though.
please, dont hate yourself jess.
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