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To whom ever it concerns
Contributed by
Smiley_18
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Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 04:08:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
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How many days must I loose to this illness that consumes me?
Before someone belives I cannot control these emotions.
Anger reflects my sorrow and disappointments.
I know no other way to get things across,
because noone listens.
I'm told i'm fine.
If I was fine I wouldn't have this deadly desire.
But you don't care.
You would rather have your blinders on.
Than see the real me.
See the problems i go through.
You want to know the real reason you bought me all thoughs things?
You were trying to cover up the resentful emotions that i now hold for a drunk.
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Smiley_18
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2006-08-16 04:08:17]
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Re: To whom ever it concerns
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by chaos78 on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 07:27:42 AM AEST
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i like this good write
if there is something wrong
put in your writing trust me it help
have a bless day
chaos |
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Re: To whom ever it concerns
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by n2dep2care on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 10:29:35 AM AEST
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Emotionally powerful write!
Your pain is clearly seen in your words.
Keep up the great work.
Laurie
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