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Have you Seen...
Contributed by
Richard
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Tuesday, 11th February 2003 @ 11:00:00 PM in AEST
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Have you seen the eyes of death?
Felt a souls last, painfull breath?
Seen a knife plunge into skin?
Seen the heart burst from within?
Have you seen the dark cloaked reaper?
Have you seen the dying sleeper?
Have you seen the body rotting?
Have you seen the red blood clotting?
Have you seen things you should not?
Have you seen what should be forgot?
Have you seen the murder done?
Have you seen people kill, and run?
Have you seen the bright light fail?
Have you seen the death boat sail?
Have you seen the death pyre burning?
Have you seen a lost love yearning?
I have...
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Richard
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2003-02-11 23:00:00]
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Re: Have you Seen...
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 01:39:08 AM AEST
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| This is a great peice of work, really heart felt. |
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Re: Have you Seen...
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by Ivy on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:56:21 AM AEST
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| feels that the poet was really very hurt when he wrote this poem. we written. |
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Re: Have you Seen...
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by Wrybod on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:59:47 AM AEST
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Richard, At last somebody who can write Pathos in Poetry that rhymes, scans and uses repetition to hammer home a point..
Much more memorable in consequence.
Yes I've been there more than once. You see it in one of mine "I dont want to see you anymore"
Good write. I'll do the rest of yours today (Now the site is back to normal) |
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Re: Have you Seen...
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by tease_whizz on
Monday, 3rd March 2003 @ 11:25:11 AM AEST
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"Have you seen the eyes of death?
Felt a souls last, painfull breath?"
finally, a poem that expresses such dark emotions in a regular rhyme scheme. great write, keep them coming, Kate x
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Re: Have you Seen...
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by wolfflow on
Saturday, 22nd March 2003 @ 02:33:15 PM AEST
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| great poem!! |
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