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A FANTASY
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:19:56 PM in AEST
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You have left, wont see you any more,
you left this morning, walked out the door,
you need not have gone, what did I do,
already I am missing you,
I sit and cry, im so alone,
I know your never coming home,
your were the one I was looking for,
now I sit and gaze, at the open door,
we could of travelled, to exotic places,
in my mind I had packed our cases,
why did it have to happen like this,
you never so much as blew me a kiss,
so tall and handsome such a wonderful face,
now my lifes in shatters, what a waste,
I yearned for your kisses, fell for your charms,
wanted to hold you in my arms,
imagined us making love,
underneath the stars above,
my life with you would of been much sweeter,
yet you only came, to read the gas meter.
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lillyjane
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Re: A FANTASY
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by Autumns_kiss on
Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 04:54:57 PM AEST
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That's such a beautiful poem. i feel like i can relate to it so easily.
p.s. short people can be good looking too :p |
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Re: A FANTASY
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:57:32 PM AEST
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| Such a funny poem, I loved it!! P.S - I'm sure there are good looking short people but they don't appear in many fantasies!! Oops! I'm sure to be attacked for that comment! |
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Re: A FANTASY
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 10:11:42 PM AEST
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lilly..this was HILARIOUS!! I was literally laughing
my silly butt off at the last line ... imagining you - face pressed
against the glass .. pining away for mister metre man .. ROFLMBO!!!
Excellent write.
~Breezy
(thinking I may have just overdosed on chocolate tonight! lol) |
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Re: A FANTASY
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by candysears on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 08:28:38 AM AEST
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This is sweet and flow well...I rather like this write..
God Bless!
C.S |
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Re: A FANTASY
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 12:19:02 AM AEST
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beautiful poem.......and yes, we all do have fantasies, but i found the less i do the happier i'll be so....lol. great write.
--talli |
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