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Contributed by
jerseysue
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Wednesday, 16th August 2006 @ 02:37:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Change your outlook , change your ways,
Then perhaps you will be happy one day,
Go out into the big wide world my friend,
The opportunities are there, there is no end,
Give your views ,Want me to take them,
Wether or not I love or hate them,
I am not childish , just like to joke,
I won't fix it, if it is not broke,
I would never contradict someone,
For I don't think that is the way,
So give me the reason why,
I said things wrong today
For I have never judged you ,
On anything you have done,
But to tell me to change my lines,
Well I think that is wrong,
The more I think about it,
My words are mine to choose,
So no matter if i am happy or sad,
Either way I seem to lose,
But no I am not beaten,
And for friendships sake,
I will keep a low profile,
And give you a break,
So sometimes I may be happy,
And sometimes I might be blue,
So if you want a friend for life,
I think thats up to you
Copyright ©
jerseysue
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2006-08-16 14:37:40]
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Re: Changes
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 02:35:30 AM AEST
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For I have never judged you ,
On anything you have done,
But to tell me to change my lines,
Well I think that is wrong,
i like the whole poem but these lines yelled out to me. i understand completely
great poem!!! :D |
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