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A Farewell to A Love
Contributed by
autumns_kiss
on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 01:07:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Fragile innocence, shattered
Young love slashed by jealousy's sabre
When the dust clears... center stage
A young boy, with his head in his hands
Cries lament in the light of the moon
"Star light, star bright can I make a wish?
I promise I won't be greedy or even selfish
By the purest thread that's in my soul
I simply wish for her love, that's all"
The simplest of treasures
Now buried deep in the cave of wonder
The cure to a young boy's broken heart
The affection of girl.
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autumns_kiss
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2006-08-17 01:07:07]
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Re: A Farewell to A Love
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by Vampirequeen on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 01:25:05 AM AEST
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wow it seems so sad.
you did a great job on this one. |
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Re: A Farewell to A Love
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by lillyjane on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 03:37:21 AM AEST
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| Brilliant poem, it must of hurt though.. xxx |
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