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Making Love to Pen and Paper
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 10:49:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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stick out your tongue
and softly say
ahhhhhhh
rub on two of these
ill see you in the morning
love lasts all night
tired, from the up and down motion
sweaty tears
of orgasmic
man potion
organic caution
forgotten
protection
i was not careful
give me sympathy
in all the right places
pretend, if you must
make it seem
as though you knew me, once
as though you cared
show me compassion
when cushions
have deflated
less then elated
subjugated and flattened
beyond repair
i can usually tell, a roses smell
from the ashes of a flaming hell
a wishing well
with dry buckets, skeletal,
fish in the pale
wealth from rockets
a cat turns to eat its own tail
seconds away from licking the third electric rail
it itches from bites
left by insects
who watch
men conjugate at night
from left to right
dressed in off-white
the line forms
in the rear
of the bubbled sphere
holding it all in air-tight
confiscated were the
essential ingredients
necessary for the process of expedience
for quickness is the relief of immobility
hostilities erupt into contemptuous wars
pretentious whores
after all, isnt that what I came here for?
sad, I know
you dont have to tell me twice
________
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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Re: Making Love to Pen and Paper
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by Man_On_High on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:46:32 PM AEST
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what a title!
..I love how you walk that fine line between contempt and disgust-
1st stanzas best for me - the whole work is brilliant-
5.. as always-
B |
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Re: Making Love to Pen and Paper
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by wizard on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 06:57:41 PM AEST
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an interesting piece for sure! i thoroughly enjoyed it!!!
wiz |
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Re: Making Love to Pen and Paper
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:17:16 PM AEST
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I am thinking I would love to hear this aloud. It has a sort of slam feel to it. The off beat rhyming adds a synchopated edge that was a pleasure to read.
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Re: Making Love to Pen and Paper
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th August 2006 @ 09:53:56 PM AEST
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"give me sympathy
in all the right places"
I can't tell you how much I love those lines .. I realize I
am taking it out of context but it just feels like something
familiar to me .. something we all crave at one time or
another ...
there is an edginess to this that moves those lines
to a whole different realm .. quite intriguing
~Breezy
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Re: Making Love to Pen and Paper
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by brew on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 09:14:10 PM AEST
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taken from the heart, yet filled with an interesting flare......it was indeed a differ and eye catching write....a few stanzas took the whole.......
You did for the reader what was set out to do
Brew~ |
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