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Death
Contributed by
nickyboy
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Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 01:50:09 AM in AEST
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Cold and breathless i lay on the floor.
The essecnce of steel becoming one with my body.
As i drift into a deep sleep my life flashes before my eyes.
I see how much hate i had in my life, how much love i never experinced.
All the faces that have ever hated me or dispised me appear to me as vivid pictures.
then i realize that i dont care anymore, so i welcome my new found freind death with open arms.
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2006-08-18 01:50:09]
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Re: Death
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 02:31:06 AM AEST
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| i wouldnt say its crappy... i thought it to be pretty good, your not the only to feel this way. A+++ |
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Re: Death
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 04:37:13 AM AEST
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| Really good not crappy at all, very emotional its true we do all get thease feelings. xxx |
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