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The Mirror
Contributed by
russel1311
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Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 03:28:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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He weeps, Down on his knees, Head in hands. He gulps, Hardly able to breathe, As wave after wave Of pain Washes over him. His crying, his sobs Uncontrollable. And yet, he is disgusted And ashamed of them. Ashamed to indulge. But still he cries.
She crouches over him, Arms aroubd his shoulders, Comforting, wiping away The tears that will not stop. She whispers tenderly, Wanting to help, To put a stop to the pain Of the man she loves. Calming words, Soothing, quieting, They don't work. Still the pain and the sobbing Continues.
Her attempts to help, To understand, Only make things worse. How could she know? The only one he loves, The only one he can turn to, Is the one he has betrayed.
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Re: The Mirror
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 03:36:01 AM AEST (User
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Very sad but well wriiten.
Hope he feels better really soon.
huggs, prayer,
emy
At least he still has a consciene and that's a good thing. |
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Re: The Mirror
(User Rating: 1 ) by lillyjane on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 04:33:51 AM AEST (User
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So sad, people make mistakes and are lucky to have such a loving person who forgives them.. xxx |
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Re: The Mirror
(User Rating: 1 ) by Ruby2sdy on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 02:12:07 PM AEST (User
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I really like this, your structure and style help to make this poem an intriguing and compulsive read, and the subject matter reflects the experiences of (too) many in life, brilliant!
2sdyx |
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